Polish docs for installing airbyte on Plural (#9461)

* Polish docs for installing airbyte on Plural

* addressed Abhi's comments

docs/deploying-airbyte/on-plural.md

@@ -6,8 +6,9 @@ Plural is a unified application deployment platform that makes it easy to run op
 
 ## Getting Started
 
-First, install Plural and the Plural CLI by following steps 1, 2, and 3 of the instructions [here](https://docs.plural.sh/getting-started). Through this, you will also configure your cloud provider and the domain name under which your
-application will be deployed to.
+First, create an account on https://app.plural.sh.  This is simply to track your installations and allow for the delivery of automated upgrades, you will not be asked to provide any infrastructure credentials or sensitive information.
+
+Then, install the Plural CLI by following steps 1, 2, and 3 of the instructions [here](https://docs.plural.sh/getting-started). Through this, you will also configure your cloud provider and the domain name under which your application will be deployed to.
 
 Then create a fresh Git repo to store your Plural installation and from within the repo, run:
 
@@ -25,19 +26,41 @@ To install Airbyte on your Plural repo, simply run:
 plural bundle install airbyte airbyte-aws
 ```
 
+Plural's Airbyte distribution currently has support for AWS, GCP and Azure set up and ready to go, so feel free to pick whichever best fits your infrastructure.
+
 The CLI will prompt you to choose whether or not you want to use Plural OIDC, which means you're using Plural as your identity provider for SSO.
 
 After this, run:
 
 ```bash
 plural build
-plural deploy --commit "Initial Deploy."
+plural deploy --commit "deploying airbyte"
+```
+
+## Adding the Plural Console
+
+To make management of your installation as simple as possible, we recommend installing the Plural Console.  The console provides tools to manage resource scaling, receiving automated upgrades and getting out-of-the-box dashboarding and log aggregation. This can be done using the exact same process as above:
+
+```bash
+plural bundle install console console-aws
+plural build
+plural deploy --commit "deploying the console too"
 ```
 
 ## Accessing your Airbyte Installation
 
 Now, just head over to airbyte.SUBDOMAIN_NAME.onplural.sh to access the Airbyte UI.
 
-## Monitoring your Installation
+## Accessing your Console Installation
+
+To monitor and manage your Airbyte installation, head over to the Plural Console at console.YOUR_ORGANIZATION.onplural.sh (or whichever subdomain you chose).
+
+## Troubleshooting
+
+If you have any issues with installing Airbyte on Plural, feel free to jump into our [discord](https://discord.gg/bEBAMXV64s) and we can help you out.
+
+If you'd like to request any new features for our Airbyte install, feel free to open an issue or PR at https://github.com/pluralsh/plural-artifacts.
+
+## Further Reading
 
-To monitor and manage your Airbyte installation, head over to the Plural control panel at console.YOUR_ORGANIZATION.onplural.sh.
+To learn more about what you can do with Plural and more advanced uses of the platform, feel free to dive deeper into our docs [here](https://docs.plural.sh)