Update docs/troubleshooting.md

Co-authored-by: Jordan Jensen <jordan.jensen@posit.co>

Author: marcosnav

docs/troubleshooting.md

@@ -52,11 +52,11 @@ running an older version of Posit Connect than 2024.12.0, it will error.
 
 ### `renv` errors on deployment
 
-When deploying projects using `R`, it is indispensable for the Posit Publisher extension
-to have access to a record of the dependencies used by your project.
-This record is expected to be found as a `lockfile` (commonly named as `renv.lock`) generated by `renv`,
-since the [`renv` package](https://rstudio.github.io/renv/articles/renv.html)
-is a great choice to create reproducible environments.
+When deploying `R` projects, it is essential that Posit Publisher has
+access to a record of the dependencies used by your project to reproduce
+the project on Posit Connect.
+The [`renv` package](https://rstudio.github.io/renv/articles/renv.html) can
+create that record as a `lockfile` (commonly named `renv.lock`).
 
 Projects that already include a `lockfile` do not require `renv` be setup.